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Out of nowhere he came
Grew fast but stayed the same
Had no father or mother
But got a big brother
Happy aura or war cloud
He stays energetic and loud

He used to be like a hell
So wild, quite a rebel
A gentleman now he claims
But inside, he has some old flames
Bad and hard as stones
He likes making those scones

Although his land is so white, it seems black
Is the live meaningless filled with lack?
All around, so big and cold
It makes him scold
All enemies and allies
Beware him, use your eyes…

There he goes
So beautiful, in his hand a rose
So powerful and great
Towards him, why feeling hate?
Filled with passion and desire
Stay away from the hellfire

The culture he shared
Of many nations he cared
Outside with him they watched stars
The nation left him some scars
The nation might be old
But he has a heart of gold
A little poem for each of the allies of the Hetalia. Can you guess which one is meant for each one?
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SakuraTachibana Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
So what exactly do you think of England?
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Bakeneko14 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love him<3
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Follower-Of-Fate Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Wonderful!~ You're really great a writing these poems. I loved the Axis one too~
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Laurentiusje Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
U.S.A.
U.K.
Russia
France
China
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FeatherWings1638 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The reference to England's old "flames" just made me squeal (huge fan of Pirate!England)
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oreoruby Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
NO CANADA!!!?? WHAT THE-*rage quit*
But no its really beautiful
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Kakashi95fan Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm going to take a guess on each of the parts ~ :D

1. America
2. England ~ :heart:
3. Russia
4. France
5. China

Did I get them right? :la:
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Bakeneko14 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, u did Clap 
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Kakashi95fan Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyaayplz: Yay!
Do I get a cooie now? :la:
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Bakeneko14 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe, if I still have some left...Thinking... 

I am good at eating those up LOL 
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